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Vinelle Andaro by MaKuZoKu Vinelle Andaro by MaKuZoKu
A girl in Sangria 's manga =)

A great thanks to all the people who makes propsals for her name =)
I finally decided to call her "Vinelle Andaro" ,after the proposal of *gishzida
Thanks you :w00t:

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Critique by Lazarus Chernik, Creative Director for Echo-X:

The drawing is sensitive, the face and expression are beautiful, but the coloring has flattened out the inherent depth from the line drawing.

The saluting hand gets completely lost in the helmet. The muscular structure of her belly has become round and... not buff. The coloring of her right arm (hers, not the viewers) brings it further forward in space than her chest. The shorts are also unfinished. The cuff color matches her belly color, while her leg color matches her short color - which gives the optical illusion that she is wearing string garters and stockings. The shorts should be shaded to add structure and depth.

The off-center placement of the buckle also hurts the structure.

The BG is loose and whimsical. Nothing to say about that.

I think both arms look short too. Maybe the intent was to push both elbows back into space, as if they were bent away from the viewer, but that almost never looks right even when attempted by a master. Notice how many masters avoid that composition because of that.

I'm sorry to say the neck is missing and her right shoulder (the one on the left) is also missing. The arm connects directly to the clavicle. Her head floats above her body. Her left hand is much smaller than the right. Her left fingers are missing - they should be at least posed so they don't look hidden or forgotten.

The chain is a nice touch - but without the shorts being shaded the effect of it swinging between her legs isn't working.

Not bad at all, I'm just being specific about what you can improve on it.
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QuicksilverKnight Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
I love the contrast of pale dusty colors on the clothes to the more vibrant background.  You got some really cool, sexy character design!  Keep it up <3
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MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thanks ,glad you enjoy :D And welcome to D.a indeed :) 
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raynetempura Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
This is awesome! Her expression is super cute!
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MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you :D
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paulsimage Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Like it.
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MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
:D
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joejr2 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
amaxing :d
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MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks ! ^^
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joejr2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
welcome :D really cool job :D
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mzclark Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
love her facial expression. she looks so..idk..adorable! She's very sweet looking
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