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TRANSLATED -MUGEN CITY EPISODE GOOD VIBRATIONS by MaKuZoKu TRANSLATED -MUGEN CITY EPISODE GOOD VIBRATIONS by MaKuZoKu
Hi there,finally ,i made it :iconotlplz: This is the translated version of makuzoku.deviantart.com/art/Mu…
You asked for ,you got it :P BUT seriously: i have done all by myself ,so i'm sure there is a lot of weird things,and stuff :O That's why you can leave a comment if you want to point it out,if you got some questions ,etc... 
Now excuse me ,i must sleep (translation : i must play dark souls 2) :3 

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:iconmakuzoku::iconsaysplz: Thanks a lot for reading ! 
Praise the sun :3 
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:icongnoll-el:
Gnoll-El Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Hey!  Good stuff and I got most of it right! :D  There is a  rough patch or two, but nothing bad.  I am not sure that pulsion is an english word; impulse would work better, but I quibble.
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Professional General Artist
Aaaaaah :O 
Yeah ,pulsion is more "impulse" in english ^^; 
Thanks for reading ,and if there is more patches and stuff,don't be affraid to tell me, this way  can fix them all in once :D 
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:icongnoll-el:
Gnoll-El Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
The only parts that I would change is when Sasaya answers her cellphone on her bike and the doctor says "Hi Miss, here is the Doctor Freund.  I hope I don't mind".

"I hope I don't mind" should be "I hope you don't mind".

In normal conversation "Here is the Doctor Freund" would be "Doctor Freund here", but your way may conveys his character better.

"Actually...  Yesterday you have leave the session on a good mood" I would change to "Actually... Yesterday you LEFT (past tense) the session IN (common usage) a good mood"

That said, I get the feeling your English is very good and would hate to be tested against you.  Your translation to English was much better than my translation from French.
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Whazizname Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   General Artist
:)
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shellz-art Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   General Artist
hahaha  wow!!! I loved it in French, but in English it is even better!!! XD Very funny too lol. Love it, absolutely fantastic. :iconyeehawplz:
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MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Professional General Artist
Hahaha ;D 
Thanks Shelly ,glad to hear this was funny and all :D
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BerryPAWNCH Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
1.  Super Bank gets you in Super Debt!  Even worse than Normal Debt!
2.  I am so busting out the foreign language next time I get hit on by any douchebags :D
3.  Yes, 2001: Space Odyssey was the one with the apes!  I remember it well because I particularly enjoyed the part where they defeated Khan and destroyed the Death Star.
4.  I am always afraid of having random monsters and dark creatures attack me when I take walks out in the dark alone.  This has reaffirmed my fears! :headbang:
5.  Yes, lady.  ALL mangaka are crazy!  But that's what makes them awesome.
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thanks for reading :3 
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