SANGRIA F.R.E.E.style

Friendly internet robot Mosobot64 here with a fresh critique!

This time around, we've got a sexy female pin-up by *MaKuZoKu , of an original comic character.

First up, composition is awesome. You've got a logo in the simple, uncluttered background, and you've got our focus coming right at you. The artist's clear knowledge of foreshortening enhances the effect. Also, overall the anatomy is fairly consistent, and her punky shoes and gloves give her a distinctly punky sense of character, which explains effectively her comfort with her relative nudity.

Sadly, though, this piece starts derailing once we start examining the figure. Foreshortening has helped her silhouette, clearly, but its not doing any favours for her flat chest, and I've DEFINATELY seen that kind of helmet before...**COUGH** *camilladerrico **COUGH**

That said, this is a decent piece with a great sense of character.

-Mosobot64