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DOFUS-SADIDA GIRL by MaKuZoKu DOFUS-SADIDA GIRL by MaKuZoKu
Ca faisait longtemps que je voulais la faire =)
Pour les fans de ce jeu/série/univers de Ankama .
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It's been a long time i wanted to draw something from Dofus and Ankama.
Tell me what you think :D

Original drawing > [link]
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Critique by Lazarus Chernik, Creative Director for Echo-X:

It's fun and enticing. The line quality is expressive and enjoyable. The figure drawing is pretty good with a dramatic and elegant twist. I think her right arm (the arm on the left) is a little muscular and thick compared to her left arm. Part of that has to do with the sleeve's texture and color and part of that has to do with size. Perspective would make the background arm smaller/thinner than the foreground by a hair - but it's actually bigger. The foreground breast should also be more clear.

The palette is lovely but the level of rendering is uneven. The polish of the butt cheeks and the glint on her hair create a distracting depth because the rest of the figure isn't as carefully controlled. The hair texture is weak and the leaves are just improperly shaded. They are colored - but need attention to their own highlights and shadows. Those shadows would solve the structure problem of the breast and the butt.

The extremely bright object behind her isn't well done - sorry. It's so bright that is obscures the the figure and makes it actually painful to look at. I need sunglasses. More importantly, the light would completely change the figure's shading. She would be backlit and have streaks of light outlining her form. Shadows would be in the foreground. Unfortunately, the background liught source is so blistering that to make it come out right, you would end up making the figure so dark that the important details could end up illegible if handled incorrectly.

If you go back into her, I'd love to see where it goes.

Good luck!
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:iconcornaline1:
Cornaline1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
Elle est superbe !
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Merci :D
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:icontigerrrsharrrk:
TigerrrSharrrk Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
Sounds good my friend. I have some interesting ideas about that one I want to share with you. I almost finished writing the story for that one too.
Thanks..
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:icontigerrrsharrrk:
TigerrrSharrrk Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
Thanks I will definitely check it out. Do you want to see more photos of Myra or wait for now?
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
We will check it out after Hawaiian commish(es) if you want :D
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TigerrrSharrrk Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
OMG MaKu,
I just noticed this piece. She is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful. I love all the colors. The green vines and leaves really stand out and grab my attention. Not to mention the girl.
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks a lot ,Rob, :D
You should check :icongueuzav: 's artwork if you really want to see breathtakingly beautiful stuff :P
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:iconmagicblades:
MagicBlades Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really awesome, what blows my mind is the lights effects you've made.
good job pal :)
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thankyu
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:iconflyaccountant:
flyaccountant Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
you where always epic drawer !
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks you =)
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Wonderful
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:iconromainw:
RomainW Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Woaw la couleur est encore plus incroyable! Chapeau!!!!
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
Merci l'ami ^^ ca faisait longtemps qu'il fallait que j'la fasse :D
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:iconnahp75:
nahp75 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
J'adore... :love:
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
Merci encore ^^ Ca prouve qu'elle est pas si nulle que ça alors :dance:
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:iconnahp75:
nahp75 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
;p
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:iconmihaomihao:
MihaoMihao Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha ! J'me disais au départ "tiens on dirait un perso de dofus" puis quand j'ai lu la description *paf* !
Trop cool comme toujours !
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Merci =3
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:iconleviadragon99:
leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
Mm, nicely naturey and with some hints of vodoo?
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:iconmllemalice:
MlleMalice Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Magnifique ! *o*
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Merci =)
Hey t'as un bon style ,toi, bienvenue sur D.a :D
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:iconmllemalice:
MlleMalice Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Normal ! ><
Merci merci ! :D
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
De rien ^^
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:iconvoodoobizkit:
VoodooBizkit Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is really cool! Love the colors and designs^^
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks ^^
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:iconvoodoobizkit:
VoodooBizkit Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anytime(;
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:iconcoldfire0007:
coldfire0007 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
whats on her back?
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
What are you talkin about ? =)
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:iconcoldfire0007:
coldfire0007 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
that glowy thing, what is it? oh, its an excelent picture by the way
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
And thanks you ^^
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:iconcoldfire0007:
coldfire0007 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
your welcome. I looked over some of your pictures. you make very pretty girls
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks you =) Girls are one of my principal theme :D
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:iconcoldfire0007:
coldfire0007 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
you a ladies man i take it? ;)
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Lol it should be that :P
Thanks for the watch ,by the way :w00t:
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
It's a Dofus ^^
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:iconcoldfire0007:
coldfire0007 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
a dofus? whats a dofus? (sorry for asking so much)
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
It's the name of the game and the name of those strange eggs ^^' Just google it =) or check :icongueuzav: 's artwork ^^
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:iconcoldfire0007:
coldfire0007 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
ohhh. its a french game. That explains why I dont know it ^^; so Im guessing youre a big fan. Is it really fun?
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Haha ^^ I'm a noob at that game ,but i like the style of Ankama prod. , and the artists they chosed for it. I just wanted to draw a girl of this universe with my style ^^
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:iconshysnowbunny:
ShySnowBunny Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
stunning job! =3
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks ,cutebunnychu ^^
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:iconshysnowbunny:
ShySnowBunny Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^^ no problem
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:iconforestdwellerhouses:
ForestDwellerHouses Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
This is an awesome looking piece of work, I love all your color choices and how it all flows together so nicely!
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks you very much sparkie62 ^^
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:iconforestdwellerhouses:
ForestDwellerHouses Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Your very welcome!
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:iconprincess-amy:
Princess-Amy Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
this is lovely work
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks ^^
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:icontwiggierjet:
Twiggierjet Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
I like this :)
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:iconmakuzoku:
MaKuZoKu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks =)
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